My Twilight story :3


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milomouse

9:32pm Jul 9 2010 (last edited on 9:41pm Jul 9 2010)

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I dunno if it is a fanfiction or not, it has the Volturi, but it's kind of different. It doesn't have Bella or Edward xD I really don't want anyone to steal it. I'll know if you do. ^3^

 

“I don’t remember much about the night I became a vampire. Everything about it is foggy, except for the pain. It’s most likely the same for you guys,” A few other vampires nodded. I was sitting on a chair in front of a group of newborns. They were calm, mesmerized by my every word. I smiled to myself before I kept talking. “That was 200 years ago. I was born in 1797. I was changed into a vampire when I was 12, almost 13. So yes,” I nodded as a few raised their hands, “I am illegal. I see you have been listening to the teachers. Anyway, all I know is that the Volturi will never find me.” I stopped when a man who looked to be under 30 put up his hand. “Yes?”
    “How do you know they won’t find you?” He asked, a quizzical ex
pression on his pale face.

    “Have your teachers told you about vampires having powers?” I asked the group. Over half of the vampires shook their heads, while the others just stared at me. “Yes. 1 in 50 vampires get extraordinary powers, unlike anything seen on this earth before. So,” I said, looking at the man who had asked the question, “The answer to your question is that I have the power to attract or repel people. That is why all of you are listening to me calmly, and not outside trying to rip each others limbs off.” A few vampires laughed quietly. “I can make people so repelled that they can’t even look at me. That is why the Volturi won’t be able to find me. They will never be able to see me.
   
"Okay,” I said, clapping my hands together. “For next week’s lesson, I want you all to have thought about the night you became a vampire, and to have thought about whether or not you have any powers. I’ll see you next week.” I took the attraction away and the newborns stood and walked towards the door. “Oh, and one more thing,” I said and they all stopped. “Next week, I want you all to come back. Every single one of you. So no fighting.” They all nodded and left. I stood up and was about to walk outside when my friend Zoë, a 16 year old that was made into a vampire 4 years after me, walked in.
   
“I just got a vision.” She said anxiously. Zoë had the power of being able to see both the past and the future, and she calls them visions.
   
“Who?” I asked immediately.
   
“The Volturi. They… They somehow learned about you.” I bit my lip.
    “How?”
   
“Some newborn told them. They’re coming… Fast.” 
    “I’ll be okay. I’ll just repel them.” Zoë grabbed my hands.
   
“It’s not going to work that way,” Zoë said. “They’re bringing Alec and Jane. You know their powers, right?” My eyes widened and I bit my lip harder. It was like biting into stone. “Alec can get rid of every sense, and Jane can create the illusion of pain.” I took a deep breath. 
    “You’re making this worse, Zoë.” I said.
   
“Sorry!” She said. “I have to go, anyway. I saw that a few newborns are going to start a fight in a few minutes. I have to go stop it.” I nodded and she left quickly.

 

 

 

 

 

I'll write more when I can ;3 Please read.




Mechromancer

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I love it!



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milomouse

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Thank you, Tri. c:



Funlover6

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omgizzle thats so cool!



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milomouse

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Thank you Fun! :D I'm writing more now ^3^



Nouveau

2:39pm Jul 11 2010

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Looks good so far.  ;o  I've only read the first two Twilight books, but this sounds like it matches the books pretty well as far as the Volturi go.  I'd love to read more. <3






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Funlover6

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yay! I cant wait to read more :D



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milomouse

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I actually haven't done much more of this, but I've started another Twilight story, this time with the Cullens. And the Volturi. And my character. But I don't know if I should put it up here. I haven't shown anyone it xD




iloveotter

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Pretty Good

But the Alec and Jane is copied.

milomouse

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Iloveotter: It's a fanfiction, you can use characters from books/movies. I think. xD I'm not selling it or anything, so it's fine.



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