Loving You (A song written out of boredom. 8D)


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Rika

7:28pm May 10 2012 (last edited on 10:34pm May 15 2012)

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Loving you just isn't something I can stop doing.
No matter how many times you knock me down.
You can't see
How much it hurts
When you try to say that
You love me.

[Chorus]
I loved you then and I love you now,
I smile and laugh, but I don't know how,
I softly say I love you still,
I gently say I'll love you 'til
I draw my last breath.

I put you on a pedestal in my heart.
Don't know when or how to start.
Unsure how to truly show I care.
Tell me now, please do share,
How can I prove to you
How much I love you?

[Chorus]

You hold my heart in your hands.
If you want, then you can
Treat it gentle or treat it rough,
Hold it close, tear it up,
I don't care as long as you
Know I love you.

[Chorus]

You just don't know
How I need to show
You hold my heart, you hold my soul
You hold all that there is to me.
But do you believe me
When I tell you
That I love you?

[Chorus x2 with decrescendo]





((Um, comments and critique appreciated~ >.>))




FluzzMe

9:29pm May 15 2012

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It. Was. Awesome. I actually sung it in front of my family. I never sing. Ever. ~<3




Rika

10:23pm May 15 2012

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;O; Seriously?

I just seriously had my entire day made. ;U;'''' I didn't think anyone would actually like, sing it. And I just. Have no words. <333333333



FluzzMe

10:57am May 16 2012

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xD Eh. I didn't think I would sing anything either, but I did. o.o




Rika

6:55pm May 25 2013

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Bumping up for possible critique. uwu



boomboom39

6:59pm May 30 2013

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love'd it! I wish I knew what you wanted it to sound like though. 
Rika

9:14pm May 30 2013

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Well I can't write music so. |D



johomo

12:31pm Jun 25 2013

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That is AWESOME!!!!

 I might sing that sometime. It's AWESOME!



"I am a ghost
Of a girl
That I want to be most.

I am the shell
Of a girl
That I used
To know well." ♫♪♫♪
griffinwings

6:35pm Jul 17 2013

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awesome song :D



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