Looking for up and coming writers!!


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turkeydjagwp

6:35am Apr 27 2010

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I need someone who's good and can be my "personal writer"~  Lol. I mean, someone who I can always go to in case I need a story for a pet. So I am going to sift through your applications and see who it can be. I will refer you to other people. I will show you off. I will flaunt your talent. I will pay you for every story.

Answer these:

What styles can you write in? Fanfiction, Sci-Fi, Comedy, etc.

What POV can you write in? 3rd person, first person, etc..

How much do you want your "salary" to be?

Example of your work:




Ayt. You see my saying this on the SB? Yes, it means something.
luvsarahdessen97

3:06pm Apr 27 2010

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Hey. I saw your post and i decided to give it a try.

1.) I do mostly drama. But I also add in some comedy and a little bit of romance. If you want, I can rmail you a few ideas that I have.

2.) I prefer first person. It's my favorite to write in. But I won't argue with third person either. I love that too. As for second person, I found a little trick to throw it into my stories now and then. Sounds weird, right? but its actually pretty cool.

3.) I dont need ANY salary at all! Money wise, I mean. But if you do hire me, I would like for you to recommend my stories to your friends, and make sure they give me feedback. You will need to feedback, too, but I would like true feedback with tips and criticism. But I dont need any money.

This example is not from a story I wrote. It was a spur of the moment kind of thing. It's not really too long, but it kind of shows you what kind of writer I am. (my trick for 2nd person is in this piece)

 

I sit down at my computer desk, of course, without my computer since my dad took it away, and start rummaging through the draws, searching for a pen. Papers are overclouding the desk, laying ontop of each other and sprawling out against the wood. They are really the only thing I can see. Because my mind is locked on one phrase. Actually, more of one selection. That one of these papers would soon be plastered with my emotions, more importantly, my emotions to Kyle. And I don't know whether or not they will make any sense, because my thoughts are all just little pieces of string falling into one complex knot that only grew and never could be undone. So I guess my only choices are either to try to pull out those strings in that knot and work with that, or just take what I have and let it be.

Let it be. I can still imagine the words slipping off of Kyle's lips. He would say that to me everytime I would start frantically screaming about a situation, or putting my head in my hands, whispering to myself, "What should I do?" And Kyle would make it seem so simple. And okay, it really does seem so simple. I mean, it's three words, right? How difficult can they really be? But then I remember I love you, and how much those three words can turn a person upside down.

One thing I will always know and Kyle won't is that the shortest phrases always hold the longest meanings.

But that still doesn't mean we're equals. Oh no, we are not. Kyle is much higher, or stronger, or more knowledgable than I can ever be. I tell myself, when I start having my blood run with jealousy, that his knowledge is simply because of the way he was raised. That he would have been just like me, or even worse, if he went through my life.

But I was lying to myself whenever I said that. Because I knew, and every other person on this insane planet who spoke to Kyle knew the real reason why he was so smart. Because unlike the rest of the world, he didn't push the information out of way, fearing it would be something he wouldn't like. Oh no, Kyle accepted everything in his life that was thrown at him. Lucky for him, however, everything that was thrown at him was always good.

Another thing I learned to notice about him was he always said the exact things I didn't agree with. Everything he said was debatable to me. And Kyle knew it two. Sometimes, when we would be talking with a group, he would take something I told him earlier and completeley twist it around, glancing over at me with this stupid, boyish smrik on his face.

But as I think over how he would say everything I disagreed with, I start to wonder if maybe it's my fault. Maybe Kyle didn't always purpossely say what I didn't want to hear, maybe I just didn't want to hear it because it was coming out of Kyle's mouth. Maybe I was just being too stubborn and making myself the victim and him the guilty one.

Maybe that's what I've been doing all along.

I shake the thought away. Even when he's not in prescence, Kyle is still with me somehow. And I don't mean in that beautiful when-someone-dies-and-is-always-watching… kind of way. I mean the his-voice-is-always-running-through-my-h… kind of way. And every move I do, no matter how simple or daily it may be, I can always see in my mind, Kyle's reaction to it. Which is sort of funny, because he is the most unpredictable person I have ever met. And yet I can always picture what he would say to me.

So Kyle, I think to myself, as if he was literally inside my head and reading my thoughts like they were a diary, do you want me to write some more? Okay, I will. Do you rememember when you told me that we live to die? And I shook my head, saying that wasn't true, and you just told me it was over and over again? Well, Kyle, after you left, your voice was still playing through my head. Like an ipod, I suppose, stuck at full volume with headphones hot glued to my ears. I couldn't get it out.

I remember soaking your words in my mind, trying to find some complication with them. Rummaging through every letter, every space between them, destined to find some sort of flaw or misunderstanding within them. But in the end, you know what happened then? I found myself right back where we started.
"We live to die." Yes, Kyle, we do. And there is nothing we can do
about it.

Rika

3:09pm Apr 27 2010

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Does the example have to be for a pet? o: 'Cause I actually have a short story-like thing up that I could show you. I got bored here at the library one day and was listening to Like The Rain by Clint Black...which inspired the whole darn thing. xD




kogerer

7:41am May 22 2010 (last edited on 7:17pm May 24 2010)

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My name is Kogerer and I loooooove to write stories. I have lots of good stories and I also can do poetry.

My Info: 

-I write lots of fantasy like vampires, werewolves, people with powers...  But I can also do great real life stories to.

-I can do both first person and second person but I put more emotion into the first person.

-I won't work for much but I would like a little more than 5k per story or poem.  I will work for anything, preferably tu but we can work out the amount if you hire me.  I'm always willing to negotiate.  I also want to put my name where people can recognize my talent for writing.

Example of My Work:

Here is a vampire story I am working on, it is my biggest project at the moment and I am still in the process of writing it.  I'm just going to keep writing and hope to keep getting better. Laughingtle="Laughing" />

http://www.rescreatu.com/forum/cat/arts/writing/a-story-of-romance-action-and-vampires/~page/1/#post_760457

(If the link does not work, right click it then scroll down and click "go to [link]") 

 

*Thank you and please rmail me is you are interested. 




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Eringirl1

8:21am May 22 2010

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-I right mainly fantasy,sci-fi, and realistic fiction, but my horizons are open

-Any point of view but mainly i write in third person.

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-I don't care as long as i know SOMEONE likes my story 

Example:

 

 

Feather paused as she neared the edge of the road. She glanced around quickly; making sure no one was watching her. Then like a whisper of wind, she slipped beneath the bridge and into the tunnel. To most people it would seem like a sewage pipe, but that is what you are supposed to think. To Feather, it was the quickest route home. Winding through the twists and turns of the tunnel,

Feather ran her fingers along the walls beside her. There was no one about in the tunnels so near dawn, and Feather only p*censored*ed batty Mrs. Abbot sitting in an alcove, selling her canned peaches. Just as the sun started to tinge the dark night sky pink, Feather reached the entrance to her home, ducked in through the open gate and stepped into the courtyard. The light coming from the storm drain overhead told her it was very early morning. Feather turned toward the right and went into the kitchen. Her mother was there, making eggs and toast, Feather’s favorite.

                         “How did the hunting go last night?” Feather’s mother asked.

                          “Great“, Feather said, “I got a whole bag of carrots, the wheat you wanted, and some apples.” Mother nodded, and took Feather’s bag off to the pantry to empty. Feather smiled. The uppers are so stupid. Us Lowers take their food all the time, and they think it’s animals, or the weather. Ha! At least I am lucky though. I live in the country, where we can hunt on farms or gardens. In the city, they have to take food out of the trash!

            Mother came back and handed Feather the empty food bag with a smile.

“You did well today Feather, But you must be tired. Go get some sleep“, she said and waved Feather off to her room. Feather stumbled wearily to her room and collapsed on her pallet. She was asleep as soon as her head hit the pillow.         

Feather woke to see the late afternoon sun shining in through the drain that was her window. Now, you night be wondering, “Aren’t those drains in the side of the road use to collect rainwater and runoff? How can she be using it as a window?” It is really simple actually, The Lowers have devised a system to collect and carry the water using special aqueducts to the purification plant. Then it is brought back to the Lowers house and they use it for cooking, cleaning, and drinking, much like us.

Feather glanced around her room. Her bed lay on the floor, Japanese style. She had a few raggedy posters of some outdated bands hanging on the walls, a quilt her grandmother had made for her on the bed, a set of shelves with some cl*censored*ic books her mom had given her, and in the corner the phone her mom had given her for her birthday. Her clothes were folded neatly inside a low dresser that was also her desk. Feather took off her crumpled clothes from yesterday and pulled on a long, multicolored skirt and a grey sweater. She slipped on her flats and pulled her hair up before walking into the courtyard. Mother was arranging flowers in a terra cotta vase.

“Mom, I’m off to Lilly’s house. I’ll be back before dinner!” Feather called as she lit her glow lamp.

“Okay, but be careful. It rained last night and the tunnels are slippery!” Her mom cautioned.

Feather rushed out into the familiar tunnels, her skirt sweeping the ground. Following the glow of her light, Feather soon reached Lilly’s house. She knocked quickly on the screen door three times.

 

please pick me! 

 




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DecemberMoon

3:24pm May 24 2010

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Being a person's personal writer could be very helpful to me, it would give me more of a reason to write, and an incentive to do so!

1.  I've always written in some sort of fantasy setting, although I usually put in some humor too... I could probably do most anything, though, if I had the need to. Fanfictions would likely be the most challenging for me.

 

2.  I can write in any point of view. Even 4th person. XD 

 

3.  Salary? I'd be happy to not work for any set price at all. I mostly just want to get my name more well known, and see if there's anyone out there who thinks I have any talent at all.

 

4. An example of my writing can be found here. (hopefully)  http://www.rescreatu.com/forum/cat/arts/writing/well-it-039-s-a-story-i-guess-anybody-want-to-read-it-/~page/1/

If that doesn't work, just look for my writing thread here in the forum.

luvsarahdessen97

7:38pm May 25 2010

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what's 4th person? haha
BlackDuck

6:36pm Jun 9 2010

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lakendrashley1234321

10:47am Jun 10 2010

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Styles: I can write in any style but i prefer fiction.

POV: I write in any POV that i want but prefer 1st and 2nd.

Salary: I don't really care i just love to write. I dont care if i work for free.

Example:It was a dark, cloudy night when I saw a slight movement by a nearby tree. I slowly and carefully walked toward the tree. When I got up the courage to look behing the thick tree trunk covered in pale green moss I saw a bright pink Iluvu staring me straight in the eyes. Then that Iluvu darted away with only a single hesitation. I looked down to see another spectacular surprise. A perfect Iluvu egg nestled in a nest of soft leaves. I then looked towards the direction the mother had run off to and saw the saddest sight I had ever seen. The mother Iluvu was staring at her egg with big, beautiful, wet eyes. I thought I saw a single tear stream down her cheek as she ran off without a sound. I knew that if this egg was left alone it would surely be eaten by a hungry creatu. I was comepletely torn, if I left the egg it may get eaten, but if I take it and the mother comes back she will be devastated. I then decided that I would stay right here with the egg and spend the night. A while later I was nestled up by the trunk with the egg in my hands. I heard a flapping sound and looked up to see a cream Easero fluttering up above me. I was familiar with Easeros and was not the least bit scared. I suddenly blurted out, "What is your name?" The Easero looked at me and said, "Why, my name is Jamaican. I don't know why because I'm not Jamaican at all. What is your name?" I said, "My name is Lakendrashley1234321, but you can call me Lake." "You know you really shouldn't touch something that isn't yours.", Jamaican said as she nodded towards the egg in my hand. "Well, I scared the mother off and I wanted the egg to be safe." "I understand." Just then a pink figure leaped out of the nearby raspberry bushes. She walked towards me and then very surprisingly smiled. She said, "I am very grateful for you staying with my egg. A pack of hungry Meikos were coming but I could not leave my egg alone nor carry it." "No problem", I said. I would give you my egg because you saved it but that would not be fair to other travelers." " What is your name I must ask?" "My name is Lantrilla.", said the Iluvu. "Well Lantrilla, I must be going now." "I very much wish you the best." Lantrilla said. I went home and time p*censored*ed as usual. One day a while later I got a letter from my dear friend girrockzamazing. It said that she had a natural Iluvu named Shaych. She was wondering if I would like to have him. Of course I said yes. She sent him over and I was suddenly very happy. He said his mother had snuck in house one day and told him a story of a girl named Lakendrashley1234321. Who had saved him before he was born. I told him I was that girl and we both lived happy and satisfied for the rest of eternity. The End

doggie116

2:43pm Jun 10 2010

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What styles can you write in? Fantisy and finction... but I can mold to anything really... except horror....

What POV can you write in? 1st and 3rd. I like first alot....

How much do you want your "salary" to be? oh i dunno... some TU, but really I don't need anything, nothing really monthly or daily like in real life, but just random gifts are good.

Example of your work: Papa burst through the door with a belt in his hand, slapping it heavily against the couch, trying to scare me.  He's been doing this since I was young enough to still chew on his belt.  Now I know to run.  He slapped it against the olive green leather couch, attempting to hit me.  It was too close,  so I ran.  I fled through the rugged back door.  I felt his breath down my neck.  I had adrenaline, and ran faster that I ever have.  I leaped over a large brown rock and felt a sharp pain on my lower thigh.

    "You idi-" Papa was cut off by a bang.  He drooped to the dusty ground.
    "PAPA!" I turned to see that he had a sticky red fluid oozing out of his ear.  "Papa... Papa... PAPA!" I whined into his unharmed ear.  "Pa-"
    "Crete." he was crying.  I've never seen Papa cry.   "Crete, listen, get your butt off this lot and run to your Aunt Lin.  She lives three streets down.  her house is-" He slumped even farther down.  I caught him.  "Her house is the green one... tell her to come here now. I nee-"  I felt Papa die.  I've never seen anyone die, and never somebody die either.  I set him down gently on the dirt and ran towards the rising,  blazing sun ahead.  I p*censored*ed two streets successfully and slowed down to a quick jog.  My lungs were aching with a sharp pain. I started slowing  down to a walk and heard another bang.  I stopped in my tracks to see a man, with a revolver in hand.  I was at gun point.  My feet wanted to run,  my heart wanted to surrender,  and my mind was dazed and confused.  My flight instinct took over and I crawled up a near by ladder which was attached to a green house that was next to me.  The higher I climbed, the lighter I felt.  Climbing,  climbing,  climbing until I reached the top.  I scurried to the other side of the  roof and looked down.  I wasn't too high up...  Maybe two stories at the most.  I was about to jump,  but a middle aged woman stopped me.  I quickly looked at her.  Had she been up here the whole time?

 

The whole story is 3 pages long and a got a 100 on it.... I turned it in for extra credit in cl*censored*





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Detneth106

12:53am Jun 12 2010

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I write in mostly fantasy, but I have taken a stab at real life. I also do poems (dunno if it's a writing genre)

I usually write in 1st or 3rd person. :P

Eh, money? I don't have a set one...

Example of your work:

Frostwing padded slowly into the Medicine Cat's den. "How is he?" she asked wearily, her head hanging down. "I'm sorry to say this but he's getting worse." Murmured Pebbletail, turning towards Frostwing. “He’s slowly getting weaker. I can stop the pain but nothing more. I’m sorry Frostwing.” At that moment, Jaggedstar groaned and lifted his head. “Frostwing, Are you there?” he asked, his voice quiet and feeble. Frostwing leapt up and curled up beside Jaggedstar, her nose touching his back. “Shush my dear, I am here.” She whispered quietly into his ear, knowing he would not see the next dawn.

Bramblekit snarled playfully at Leafkit. “You can’t me!” he meowed happily. “I’m Jaggedstar, the leader of Duskclan! I can beat you any day.” Leafkit leapt at him and knocked him over. Grappling playfully, the two didn’t notice Thorntail and bumped into him. “Watch it!” he snarled angrily, his fur fluffing up in anger. “I have enough to do with Jaggedstar sick without you kits bothering me!” Bramblekit and Leafkit cowered away from him and ran to their mother, burrowing under her belly, squeaking in fright. “Hush! They didn’t mean it Thorntail! Stop being so grumpy.” Scolded their mother Ashfur. Thorntail growled grumpily and stalked off. “It’s ok kits, he didn’t mean it.” Meowed Ashfur soothingly. The two kits soon resumed their playful acts, jumping about and tackling each other, kicking up dust and dirt.

As sunhigh came, Frostwing blinked open her eyes and looked at Jaggedstar. His breaths were coming rapidly, as if he couldn’t breathe properly. “Pebbletail? Where are you, I think something’s wrong with Jaggedstar!” Pebbletail looked out from behind the lichen curtain cutting his den off from the main Medicine cat area. “What’s wrong?” he asked in surprise, running towards the two. He stopped and pressed his ear to Jaggedstar’s flank. “He’s losing his last life. He will be with Starclan soon.” Murmured Pebbletail, the happiness draining from his eyes. Frostwing wailed loudly. “No! Jaggedstar, please don’t leave me!” she pressed her nose to his flank as Jaggedstar whispered his last words. “Don’t worry Frostwing. I will see you in Starclan someday.”

Thorntail padded up to Blackstripe. “I want you Heatherpaw, Mosstail and Thrushfeather to do a patrol of Swiftclan’s border. If there is anything odd, report back immediately. Don’t start any fight’s with the cats.” He finished sternly. “I don’t want trouble, seeing as Jaggedstar is so sick with greencough.” Blackstripe stretched and walked over to Mosstail and her apprentice Heatherpaw. “Come on. Thorntail wants us to patrol Swiftclan’s border.

Blackstripe, Heatherpaw and Mosstail slowly padded up the line of trees marking the border to Swiftclan. “What can you scent?” asked Mosstail quietly. Heatherpaw stopped and twitched her tail. “Umm, I can scent fox but it’s a couple of days old and wait!” she walked slowly over to a tree a couple of fox lengths into Duskclan’s territory and sniffed it experimentally. “This has Swiftclan scent all over it!” she meowed excitedly. Blackstripe hissed; his claws unsheathing. “What! That can’t be possible.” He growled angrily. He stalked up to the tree and sniffed it carefully. “Your right Heatherpaw, we have to tell Thorntail now.” He turned towards camp and signaled with his tail that they should follow.

Bramblekit turned and watched as the Blackstripe, Mosstail and Heatherpaw ran into camp. “What’s the matter?” he asked Ashfur. “I’m not sure. Let me ask Thorntail.” She got up and walked towards Thorntail. She prodded him with her paw, “What’s going on. Did Swiftclan do something?” she said. Thorntail turned. He grunted, “Yes, it’s Swiftclan again. They decided to further their boundaries. They actually had the nerve to mark the border a couple of fox lengths in! And how did they know that Jaggedstar was sick? They wouldn’t have dared to if it were not for that!” he said, a worried note creeping into his voice. Ashfur stood quietly for a moment before answering. “I will tell Frostwing the news. She would want to know.” Ashfur padded away to the Medicine Cat’s den.

Frostwing looked up as Ashfur walked in, her eyes dull with sadness. “What is it Ashfur? Is anything the matter?” Ashfur glanced at Jaggedstar lying in his nest. “Is he alright?” she asked in concern. She then shook her head, muttering, “Swiftclan is pushing the borders, I think they found out about Jaggedstar.” Frostwing stared at her in surprise. “That can’t be! Mousedung, now they won’t leave us alone!” Pebbletail padded in, “What’s the matter? Is it Swiftclan again?” he asked while he began to clean up the den. Ashfur nodded, “Yes, they found out about Jaggedstar. How, only Starclan knows.” Jaggedstar lifted his head and rasped out, “They know because Thorntail told him! He wants to join Duskclan with Swiftclan once I die.” He paused to rest and continued. “And that will be soon, I am growing weaker by the heartbeat and Thorntail will be leader. Before that I need to name a new deputy. Can you fetch Mosstail for me Ashfur?” Ashfur nodded in astoundment. “Of course Jaggedstar. I will at once.” She walked out and to the warriors den.

Mosstail yawned, her body aching after the training session with Heatherpaw. She was really turning into a wonderful fighter and hunter. She thought tiredly. She turned at the sound of Ashfur walking in. “Yes? I’m very tired so make it quick please.” She murmured quietly. Ashfur nodded, “Of course, but Jaggedstar wants to see you. He says it’s important.” Mosstail followed Ashfur to the Medicine Cat’s den and walked in. She blinked her eyes to accustom herself to the darkness and padded closer to Jaggedstar. “You wanted me Jaggedstar?” she asked, curious about his demand.

Jaggedstar waved his tail slightly at Pebbletail, silently asking him to come over. He whispered something in Pebbletail’s ear and Pebbletail nodded. “Of course you can.” He confirmed. Jaggedstar’s broken and battered body ached as he turned his head to Mosstail. “I need you to be the leader of Duskclan.” He said simply. “What! But…” Jaggedstar pressed his tail to her mouth. “No buts, I need you to be leader when I am gone. Thorntail is a fine deputy but what he wants for the clan is not enough. You would understand better what to do.” He closed his eyes and whispered in her ear. “I name you, Mosstail as the new deputy of Duskclan. May you be fair and loyal to all cats of Duskclan.” Mosstail shivered at the honor of being deputy. She had never imagined this in her entire life! “Thank you Jaggedstar. I will do my best to help Duskclan.” She murmured back.

 Thorntail hissed as he overheard what Jaggedstar had said. “You will only be leader over my dead body Mosstail, and I won’t let that happen!” He stalked off into the warrior’s den and lay down in his nest. He closed his eyes, thinking of ways to drive Mosstail away so that he may be Leader. His eye’s drooped lower as he lay there, until he was asleep, dreaming of fantasies where he was leader of the forest. “Thorntail, Thorntail.” Whispered Heatherpaw. “Jaggedstar’s gonna make an announcement now! He said you can’t miss it.” She said, jabbing him with her paw. Thorntail muttered grumpily and stood up, licking scraps of bracken off his fur. “I’m coming, run along now Heatherpaw.” He said angrily. He stomped heavily past Heatherpaw, shoving her out of the way to sit underneath the rock. “Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey join beneath the Highrock for a clan meeting.” Yowled Jaggedstar. “I have news concerning every cat in this clan. As you know, I have not long to live and I proclaim Mosstail as my new deputy.” Surprised whispers filled the clearing as cats muttered among themselves. “Thorntail is able but he would not be the right leader for Duskclan. Mosstail, do you accept the duty of being deputy?” Mosstail quivered, her body shaking as she whispered, “Yes, I will serve Duskclan with all that I have.” Jaggedstar nodded in approval and continued. “Then I name you Mosstail, deputy of Duskclan!” The cats began to cheer and yowl as Mosstail bent her head and licked Jaggedstar’s shoulder. “Thank you.” She murmured.

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Chapter 1

 

Willow walked down the street; it was a dark and gloomy night and rain was lashing down, causing anything it touched to become soaked. The clouds covering the moon cast shadows over the pavement, making strange nonsensical patterns. She hurried forwards, hunched slightly to keep herself warm as she neared the end of the street. At the end was only a brick wall, worn and crumbling after years of abuse. She paused in front of the wall and tapped it thrice; once to the north, once to the south and once to the west. The wall slid smoothly to the side, revealing a small wooden door. She placed her hand on the door and pushed, causing it to slide open. The effect was instantaneous, bright light spilling from the opening.

Willow paused at the threshold, making a strange symbol over her heart. It was comprised of taking the first two fingers and pressing it to your heart. Then the hand was pushed out, making the two fingers point over the threshold. No black magick here, she thought. Stepping forwards, Willow surveyed her surroundings; a couple of tables set to the right, a bar in front of her and a stage on the left side of the room, taken up by a pair of Tunghsen; fiddlers. They were playing furiously, the sound hectic and fast-paced. She pulled her cloak around herself as she neared the bar. “What can I do for you missy?” asked the large and boisterous barman. “I’m fine thank you,” Murmured Willow softly. “I’m just waiting for a friend to come.” The barman nodded and turned to continue cleaning his tankards. “Just let me know if you need anything.” Willow nodded and leaned back, resting her head on the back of the chair.

When will Ammorack come? She wondered in her mind. Just as she thought this, the door re-opened, revealing a tall hooded figure. The person crossed the floor in a few large strides and sat next to Willow. “So you came.” She said contemptuously. The figure nodded slightly and pulled down its hood, showing a proud face lined age. “Yes,” He whispered in a deep voice. “I have what you asked of; the payment for your service, though it may not be to your liking.” Willow allowed herself a small smile of satisfaction. “Thank you Ammorack, may Truennuu be kind to you. I think the payment will be fine though.” Ammorack laughed mirthlessly. “It was all I could do. You earned it many times over.” He said this while pulling out a small sack, colored a deep indigo. “For you m’lady.” He said, bowing slightly before disappearing back into the raging storm.

 Willow hefted the sack in her palm, wondering what he had given her. He had kept the nature of the payment secret, making her *censored*ume it was most likely that it wasn’t money. It was heavy and round; there was no sound of clinking coins to be heard. She tucked it into her belt and went up stairs to her bedroom. She placed her hand on the door and muttered an incantation.

G’tresh muy vanning

Comhora dooan muy veran

Teblea uva muy doshin

The door flashed brightly before fading and it clicked open. Better to be safe than sorry. She thought as she entered the now unlocked room. It was spacious and simple, being only few pieces of furniture; a small bed, a bed stand, a desk, a wardrobe and her most prized possession, a small inlayed casket decorated with Ungisle, a precious metal that originated from the northern mines. She sat on the bed, making sure to close the door and relock it before doing so, and pulled out the sack. Now that it was in brighter light, she could see the intricate designs covering the pouch. They look like dragons. She mused as she felt the sack. Finally, she pulled the drawstring open and turned it over.

 

Chapter 2

 And out fell a small round stone. Willow snorted in disgust but refrained from tossing it away. Usually, Ammorack’s payments were unusual but valuable. She still wasn’t sure she could sell it for much but one she had learned was to never underestimate Ammorack. Never. She felt the small stone, slightly surprised at its smoothness. It felt satiny and soft, like silk. It was perfectly round, showing no blemishes or dimples upon its surface. Willow marveled at the feel and was even more astonished at its coloring. It was a deep indigo, like the color of a mystical sea. The stone was imprinted with small black delicate patterns depicting dragons flying and swooping on its blue surface. Willow wasn’t yet sure what it was or even what use it could have but it was certainly beautiful; something about this stone compelled her to keep it. “I might as well keep it,” she thought aloud, “It might come in handy.” She placed it on her bed stand, watching the light reflect off the surface.




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chelsea1234

11:19am Jun 29 2010

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i write in mostly myster/ fiction but i can also do comedy and others too i will try anything u throw at me. i also mostly write in whatever it is that the person in the story is narriorating like in a diary but can also write in other ways. i will also work cheap. u namea price and ill take it anything to get my name outthere. on my website i have 2 writing pieces writen.

 

 

I was running through a field of dasies. The warm sun was beating down in my face. And sweat was forming around my hairline, and dripping down into my eyes, but I didn't care. It was the first time I had been outside since the winter had p*censored*ed and I was ready to play. My little brother Sam was down by he beach, colleting shells because the water was still to cold to swim in.I layed down in the gr*censored* for a littlebit untill I herd my mothers voice calling us in for dinner. About halfway home me and sam could smell the cornbread, pinto beans,and collardgreens cooking in the kitchen. When we got to the front door mamma was standing there waiting for us. "Take off your shoes, and wash up for dinner, oh and Sam close the door you wern't born in a barn." When i was washing up for dinner i herd the front door slam, dad was home. sam came zooming out of the bathroom yelling "Daddy,daddy,daddys home sis!" Sam lept into dads arms and practically nocked him over. "wow kiddow slowdown no running in the house you could hurt yourself." I could tell dad was stressed, but he could always put on a smile to please Sam. "Hey Sarah, are you gonna give your old man a hug?" "Shure." I ran over and gave him a hug, and went to stand by mamma.

thats part of chapter one of my book penutbutter




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chelsea1234

11:20am Jun 29 2010

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the sensored word was G R A S S like the green thing on the ground



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