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7:08am Jun 26 2010

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I am doing this for my GaS dye kit fund. XD

some examples:

writeup for a contest (caya's black ezahni Natari)

The egg shining in the spotlight, sitting on the velvet pillow on a small table. The moonlight shone into my the room through the window behind me. All was quiet, peaceful, and nothing was there to interrupt the making of our strong bonds, one thread at a time weaving through my mind and the infant that lay within the egg. I looked at the egg with longing eyes and pictured the two of us, the majestic old green ezahni which has stood by me from the day it was born,  flipping through faded pictures of his first moments, parties, and that time would be exactly like this one. I looked at the clock. Only half a minute had gone. The egg sat still and quiet, unlike the other eggs I have hatched which show signs of life even before they are ready to be hatched. What if this egg was dormant? I thought, frightened thoughts overflowed as I thought about the innocent ezahni, dead and cold, even before he could see the moon, the sky, the earth, the world. I buried my face in my hands and breathed deeply, I had to get these horrendous thoughts out of my mind. What was I thinking?

I calmed down and carressed the egg like how a mother strokes her baby's cheeks, lovingly, tenderly, at that moment i felt nothing could tear us apart. The egg jolted, giving me a fright, a fright which turned into joy soon after, when a pair of huge amber eyes interlocked with mine. Sitting bewildered, it trembled in the cold wind, it's wet, reddish black mane sticking to her fur. I took her into my arms and held him close to my chest, her heart beating against mine, in unison, together as one. The bond we had forged just a matter of seconds ago turned into reality. I looked down at the baby, which had so quickly drifted off to sleep, exhausted from hatching out of it's egg. I reached for the velvet pillow, removed the broken egg shell and placed the baby black ezahni gently onto the pillow, careful not to wake him up. I opened the drawer and fished out a golden collar, the one i had been saving for so long. Saving for my chosen one.

Line by line I exerted much strength to carve her name deep into the shining solid gold. And there was the collar, so carefully and lovingly etched into a once empty and plain golden collar. The buckle snapped open, and i lifted her head and clicked the collar on as softly as possible. I smiled, and whispered, "what a beautiful baby" to myself. I lifted her off the velvet pillow and tucked her into my bed, under the soft, warm quilt, hand-knitted by my mother. She slept so soundly, so peacefully, her chest moving up and down gently, her mane no longer wet and soft like fine threads of silk. Tears welled up in my eyes, glad that the little baby had made it into this world alive, and this little baby i will bring with me and share my happiest memories with. I stroked her head tenderly, lovingly, and whispered goodnight, before dragging an old mattress out onto the floor to sleep, not wanting to disturb her first dreams.

The moonlight shone into the room in a straight ray, splashing her collar with pure moonlight. "Natari," i read, "Natari" 

Another writeup for Caya's soon to be hatched bino ezahni. (NOAE, stands for name of albino ezahni)
(winning entry. XD)

The silken blanket wrapped the egg, keeping it warm for the long minute of it's incubation. Natari and I watched the egg anxiously, as the silent countdown in our minds narrowed to thirty. The egg jolted, and rolled about the table on which Natari had made her grand appearance. Daylight was arriving, the sun peeping over the high mountains above. I held the ezahni egg close in my arms, and Natari and I huddle closely, watching the beautiful sunset together. Natari smiled to herself and nuzzled the egg with her nose. She looked at me and licked my face and nibbled my ear. Stroking her mane gently, I laughed, "Stop it Natari, I know it's time."

With a very sudden, very strong jolt, the egg popped out of my arm and fell to the floor. My heart skipped more than just a beat, as the egg fell, closer and closer to the floor. I screamed shrilly, has the egg hit the floor with a sickening crunch. My eyes welled up with tears and i turned away, shutting my eyes so tightly i could have sworn I never would have opened them again. In my head appeared all the blood, the gore, the mess, the tears, white noise so lound and terrifying filled my ears, i became deaf, and seemingly blind, my head spun, my body felt limp and weak, my nerves went slack, and soon fell asleep. I felt numb and cold with fear, but the feelings faded as i fell into unconsciousness.

Light flooded my eyes painfully as i sat up, back and right ankle in pain. I looked up, squinting, trying hhard to see the dark shadow in front of me.

"You're up," I heard a familiar voice say, "better? doc said you sprained your ankle and your spine when you fell of your chair. What happened, you careless girl. You're lucky Natari called for me." I smiled, and said, " Natari, that girl, always calling for trouble. You can save the trouble, I can take care of myself, go feed your baby, it would be hungry by now." I smiled weakly.

 She reached down and lifted a wooden crate up onto my bed. "I'm not the only one with a newborn." Bewildered, I peered into the crate, and in it, sleeping soundly, a pure white unicorn like creature lay amongst warm blankets, one of which the silken one i had made to wrap its egg. It had a beautiful bright red mane, and it slept like a log, even moving or jolting the box would not stir her.

"The only way to wake her is this." She pulled a chocolate bar out of her posket and held it  over the box. It's eyes opened wide and it lifted its head and finished the chocolate bar in one bite. The amazement of the size of her mouth made me laugh. She looked at me with her red eyes and stumbled out of her box, staggering over and licking me and nipping me. I lifted her and kissed her, and Natari cantered over and demanded a kiss as well. I kissed Natari and ruffled her mane and hugged them close to my chest. And at that very moment It became 3 hearts which beat together as one, I am not their master, I am their sister, and we three sisters shall never be torn by anything, rain or shine, we shall play together in the yard flooded with sunshine. watch sunrise and sunset everyday, and never part, like we were one.  

We were not bonded by blood, we were bonded by soul, together.

Another writeup for caya's GaS ezahni, which I decided she will have sooner or later anyway.
Name's Zahari.

The sun was setting slowly, the dark night egging the sun on behind the himalayas mountains, as the moon as.sumed place as the king of the sky. The sky was a lovely shade of blue and purple, and stars started to appear one by one. The clock struck six, marking the start of the incubation period. I lay on my bed, recovering from the fall, egg on my quilt, NOAE sprawled on my right, burping every now and then after the huge dinner she had gulped down into her stomach. Natari sat on her nest of blue blankets and toys, and a secret stash of chocolates under everything, including her, to lure NOAE back to bed.

The egg did not show any sudden movements, just gentle rocks and weak attempts to roll off the bed. The egg appeared seemingly normal. Rocking, jerks, and such whatnot. I was sure this hatch would be fine, and there would be no worries about anything. Still, i dared not be too happy, for a hatch can fail. I stroked the egg like how I petted Natrai's, and carressed NOAE's. As the minute p*censored*ed, it was time, once again.

I sat up straight, holding the egg steady, as the egg started showing signs of hatching. The sounds of cracking filled the room as the anxiety overflowed within the three of us, the gold and silver dye kit on my bedside table, the dye kit i had torn my heart so many times for. A green head popped out of a hole at the top of the egg, eyes as wide as could he looking around bewildered, confused, before looking at me. She wriggled out of the hole, a most peculiar way to hatch. She stumble onto my chest, and looked up, smiling widely,  and licking me happily. The baby stood up,  and cantered to the left side of my bed, looking at Natari, cocking her head to the right, before stumbling over my body and sniffing NOAE. Before I knew it the two were playing with each other as if they had known each other since birth. Letting out a happy sigh, i carried the newborn back into my arms and clicked on a shining silver collar.

"I named you even before you were born, and now I know it's perfect, like it should be." I ruffle Zahari's mane and let her and NOAE play together, while Natari and I watched them silently, a sudden feeling of a hole filled in our hearts. "There's something missing," looking at Natari, grinned widely, reached over and took the dye kit on my bedside table. Opening the bottle carefully, a glittering fine powder reached the brim of the bottle.

Carrying Zahari to my lap yet again, NOAE looking questioningly at me, and slightly annoyed that i ruined their game. Zahari sprawled on my chest, smiling and rubbing her head it. I tipped the powder over her, the grains were so light that they drifted in the air, before settling onto Zahari's fur. Having coated her with the glittering powder, it soon turned grey and colouless. I then dusted the pwoder off using the provided brush, and revealed a glittering shade of gold on her body, and a fine silvery mane. I swept the final grains of dust off her, before letting her and NOAE have fun.

I smiled and lay down relaxed in my bed, Zahari and NOAE sprawling over each other, and Natari's head on my stomach. I stroked Natari's head, and fingered her mane. Once again my heart felt complete, as if the last piece of jigsaw had been fitted, and all that was left to do was admire and enjoy it, enjoy as 4 sisters united by heart and soul.

Examples of short demented dialogue stories XD:

After Natari was hatched...

RAWR -CAS BITES CAYA-

-NNEEEEEEIIIGH!!!!!!!!-

CAS: WHAT?

-PAUSE-

CAS: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!!!!!!!! NUUUUUU

NATARI HEADBUTTS CAS WITH HER SHARP HORN.

CAS DIES from excessive blood loss.

CAYA SITS ON NATARI AND RUNS FROM THE CRIME SCENE

After NOAE was hatched...

cas: GRAAAAARR! I AM BACK! GRRRRRRR...

-Natari stands up and snorts-

cas: WHY YOU LITTLE... RAAWRR! -rushes toward Natari-

-NOAE- JUMPS ON CAS

cas: HEY GET OFF OF ME YOU LITTLE BRUTE!

-Natari get really angry-

cas: EEEEK NUUU AAARRRGHH

-Natari swiftly picks -NOAE- up and tramples all over cas-

Caya: YAY go Natari! -hugs ezahnis- CAS DON'T COME HERE EVER AGAIN!

cas: dies again of pwned-ness.

After Zahari was born...

cas: BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. I... AM... BACK.

caya raises an eyebrow and looks at Natari.

Natari nods and looks at Zahari

Zahari nods and looks at cas.

cas: SO? YOU THINK THAT PATHETIC THING CAN DEFEAT ME??? NOT A CHANCE. MWAHAHAHAHA.

Zahari narrows her eyes and starts running towards cas really quickly.

Cas draws out a pistol and aims it at Zahari.

cas: ARGH OMG WHAT WHAT OWWWWW.

cas turns her head and sees NOAE preparing to headbutt again.

cas gets attacked from infront and behind.

cas: YOOWWWWWWWWWWWWW.......

cas flies away.

Natari smiles and nods and hands them a chocolate bar.

NOAE devours all of it while Zahari sprawls all over Caya.

Caya laughs and gives Zahari a kiss and shoves a muffin bigger than the choco bar into zahari's mouth as a reward.

Zahari walks away happily with her prize while NOAE sits on the ground, wishing for a muffin.

 

 

as you can see,

Natari = very good fighter, is the oldest among all of them, like a sister to Caya.

NOAE = second oldest, but about the same age as Zahari, LOVES food.

Zahari = very loyal to Caya, very loving and caring.

 

 

DETAILS. X)

WRITEUPS-->Well, for the first one, a few paragraphs, probably take from 5 minutes to half an hour. One writeup like that costs... no less than 10k? 0_0 I prefer tu, but really, just try me, state how much you're willing to pay.

Demented-->For the demented torturings, their easier and take up to a max of half an hour depending on how much dialogue there is. X) a minimum of 5k.

I can also do a series for you, like above, a continued story of all your characters. And a long series it can be, if you want. This will range from 20k-500k depending on how many episodes you want. Once, again, try me, I accept almost anything.

Picture based writeups would mean that you give me a picture/creatu and I start writing from there. If you do not give me any guidelines, I will form a personality and character I deem fit. If pictures do not have a background I will come up with one myself, or you gimme one. These will cost about 5k-10k

OPTIONS:

For the all the types, there will be

-profile

-petpage

-entertainment

- homework

So, here are the order forms:

I WANT A SERIES

ti
tle? :

Demented/writeup? :

Type? :

topic? :

Basic guidelines or decription? :

setting? :

Anything else?

 

I WANT A PICTURE WRITEUP

ti
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Picture? :

Guidelines? :

Anything else? :

Caya

1:44pm Jun 26 2010

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I'm in every single example. xD Lol.



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Life

5:29am Jun 27 2010

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yesh you are caya. XD

heheh.

XD

caya's a megastar.

Juke

12:53am Jun 29 2010 (last edited on 12:54am Jun 29 2010)

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ti
tle? : Quoth the Raven

Picture? : -prods Fursona on profile- Especially that last one. Her name's Nevermore... Which is why the funky ti
tle. :)

Guidelines? : Something dark. Like, a horror..Only PG-13. ;_; Curse Res' children thing.

Anything else? : BLOOOOOOOOOOD. And tu for you! :D Go crazy with any other little details. Characters, plot, setting, etc. o3o




Life

7:27am Jun 30 2010 (last edited on 10:29am Jun 30 2010)

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here ya goes. :)

record for now: 5min 24 secs.

It was midnight, as I wandered through the shadows, anxious for my first meal in days. The clouds were dark red, thick with acidic rainwater, ready for a downpour anytime. I gazed at the sky through the hollow eyeholes of the skull, wondering how much longer I had to wait for suitable prey to come by. The wound on myback leg stung badly, the pain causing me to gasp, as the blood continued trickling down my leg from my last battle. I had sworn to retreat the lands if I lost, confident that I would win the battle, never did I think that my lifelong rival had gotten so good.  

Standing on fours, I peered out of the bush once again, seeing nothing but darknes, and a shadow. it was four legged, and considerably big, but smaller than me. A fully grown jackal loomed out of the darkness, failing to sense me due to his own injury. I smiled and licked my lips, flexing my wings and flicking my mask back. The jackal, letting his guard down thinking he was alone, I grabbed the opportunity like a hungry wolf and exerted all my strength to pounce on the jackal. Victory was mine, prey, at last. Blood trickled out of it's neck as I sank my teeth deeper and deeper into it's neck. The jackal died sooner than I had expected. Exhausted, I took a while to catch my breath before dragging my prize back into the dark hollow space in the bush and began to feast.

I reluctantly lifted my body off the dusty ground, looking at the bones of the jackal. Fresh red blood trickling down my jaw, I flipped my mask back on and glanced toward the direction of the unknown. I glanced back at my leg, reminded of the gore and humiliation as the pack leader I experienced days before. I hung my head in embarra.ssment, despite the absence of anything living. Stretching my wings and folding them into launch position, I mustered minimum energy and bounded lightly into the night, the aire under my wings lifting me so as not to strain my back leg. With a jump and a howl of pain and despair, I forced my back legs off the ground with full force into the winds, and continued gliding towards wherever the wind would bring me, as the last drop of blood was blown away by the wind.

One day, when I have recovered, I shall turn against my will, and return to defeat my rival once and for all, for I, Nevermore, shall never be defeated. I soared across the night sky, when a black raven appeared at my side. "quothe," I said in pleasant surprise, "why are you here?"

"To escort you wherever you go master, for we should never go back on our word, unless will tells us otherwise. It is my duty, honour and pleasure to serve you and devote my life to you for all that you have done for me." Quothe said in his deep hollow voice, " Where are we off to?" Smiling mildly under my mask, I replied, "Wherever the wind takes us to."

Where does "raven" come in anyway? 0_0 and who's quothe?

I just incorporated him into the story.

Yippee! XD kayy.

Juke

11:54am Jun 30 2010

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Yey~

And the Raven comes from Edgar Allen Poe's poem "The Raven". Lol.

I pay you in tuz now, yes? :3




Life

6:45am Jul 1 2010

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yeash. XD

yay.

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