Adieu! ((Poem))


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Honeybee

8:35pm Jul 12 2010

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'Twas a night, so fair and grande
With scintillation in the skies, so
Reminscent of fireflies!

With moonlight heaped upon my plate,
Comes my own horrid fate,
For mosquitos, mosquitos, buzz all around
and bite
and itch
and smack
and squash
And though this night is perfectly blue,
I'm afraid this evening must bid me
Adieu!



my name's russ and i only care about uldavi and cute men
NightmareDream

10:01am Jul 14 2010

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I like it! Short, sweet, I read it twice just 'cause I liked it. Wait, I'm going to go back and read it again. It makes me smile. I know that feeling. ^_^ I'll walk out since I live in this house on the countryside and walk along the property and enjoy the splendor of everything and then the bugs attack. xD I think you captured the moment well in a funny way. 



Staryulynn

5:51pm Jul 14 2010

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I agree with you Nightmare. God do I hate mosquitos.



-and a new day will dawn, for those who stand long, and the forest will echo with laughter-
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