quick 2 minute sketch.. price check?


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Shio

11:48pm Apr 6 2011 (last edited on 12:28am Apr 9 2011)

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iluvu <3

iluvuedit:Coloured version:

Not my best, but im seeing what i can get...

zozane008

8:02am Apr 7 2011

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That is so cute. |D



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fizzyizze

6:53pm Apr 8 2011

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o_o <3

With a little work, it would be amazing. It is amazing, but if it was like colored and cleaned it would be worth plenty.

Shio, would you consider commisions? 




Shio

11:24pm Apr 8 2011

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OwO never tried a commision. Info me on it? Thanks for the tips. I will probably or maybe (not) clean it and line art it ect.
iheartyou919

11:48pm Apr 8 2011

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I think it is worth about 300,000 TU in that form, but if you cleaned it up, maybe a mil or so.

I recommend you open commissions.




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Shio

12:28am Apr 9 2011

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updated it with the color version but im not so good with colors xD
iheartyou919

12:45am Apr 9 2011

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I'd edit the nose.



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Rika

5:24am Apr 9 2011

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I only have one comment. Since eyes are round, they both catch light in the same places, so unless there are multiple light sources the shine of the eyes would be in the same place for each eye. C:

Otherwise, great job for a quick sketch. C:



Shio

11:20am Apr 9 2011

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Okay lol i forgot about the nose :3 thanks for the critiqs.
zozane008

1:37pm Apr 9 2011

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I only have one problem-- You know the spots ont he head? It looks as if its bald and its shining. XD



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Shio

3:55pm Apr 9 2011

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That was what i was thinking too xD
Yoshi

1:34am Apr 11 2011 (last edited on 1:34am Apr 11 2011)

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Seems too similar to the official adult Iluvu in pose - something that will always, always put me off of buying a drawing of a Creatu. The tail even flows in exactly the same way.

Also, I'd advise trying some more subtle, all-over highlights. ;o So it's not like, dark, dark, dark, WOAH BALDING SHINE.

Contrast is certainly a good thing when it comes to shading, but it doesn't work when only a few points are in contrast.

Nice texture on the tail though.




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